| No | Line | Type of error | Text | Correction |
| 1 | 8 | Auxilliary | a lot of love and care. They do not only expect to get it from their men 0 | 0 |
| 2 | 36 | Auxilliary | nds from the west do influence various aspects of a society, like cult | 0 |
| 3 | 348 | Tense | orrect and at least partially answered the problem in question . | answer |
| 4 | 262 | Auxilliary | d recommendations of products are to capture viewers' attention. People want to procur | are intended to |
| 5 | 380 | Auxilliary | w provides us with rules that not necessarily have to be not necessarily have to be | are not necessarily |
| 6 | 693 | Tense | came cheaper and cheaper, it was getting was getting more and more common and | became |
| 7 | 603 | Tense | time has finished when women were only bearing and rearing children and taking care of a husband. There is no more suc | bore and reared children and took |
| 8 | 695 | Tense | f of smoke./^t/This situation has changed in the beginning of the 20th century wh | changed |
| 9 | 699 | Tense | ovement in L.A., the campaign has changed . The model of a rebel young m | changed |
| 10 | 436 | Passive-active voice | h broadcasts evoke , is cumulated 0 sooner or later, has to be released. T | cumulates |
| 11 | 818 | Tense | If it were all it does 0 television would by all means be | did |
| 12 | 526 | Auxilliary | there has been done enough to prevent the plague from spreading and to save | enough would have been done |
| 13 | 852 | Auxilliary | ) ideals , even if it would entail rejecting the ideals or values of their own natio | entails |
| 14 | 472 | Tense | the political system, which gives more liberty than it used to give to | gave |
| 15 | 610 | Tense | irst of all, background music ceased to be background . Oppo | has ceased |
| 16 | 116 | Tense | 0 life. Violence came to be glorified as the only means of doing a | has come |
| 17 | 512 | Tense | present medical knowledge enabled mankind to control 0 plagues | has enabled |
| 18 | 476 | Tense | strict and clear regulations gave an occasion occasion t | has given |
| 19 | 445 | Tense | However, the image of parents stayed stayed the same - father and | has remained |
| 20 | 601 | Auxilliary | e price which a man never does . First of all, she will be made to feel guilty as | has to |
| 21 | 271 | Verb number error | part of the society have rather unspecified opinions towards gays, as they | has |
| 22 | 336 | Verb number error | useless./^t/Although so much have been sad about its harmful effect | has |
| 23 | 430 | Verb number error | lthough , modern art have many opponents 0 it should be appreciate | has |
| 24 | 26 | Tense | e the epidemic is supposed to appear or where it was actually detected. In such 0 | have appeared |
| 25 | 238 | Tense | , they use drugs because they became addicted and cannot stop using them. Drugs | have become |
| 26 | 134 | Tense | t here. Recently there are more and more instances of activities of the inte | have been |
| 27 | 259 | Tense | ws that all of his/her organs had been affected by the tumor, he/she may easily break do | have been |
| 28 | 117 | Tense | all these negative phenomena deepened and they result in the incr | have deepened |
| 29 | 4 | Tense | highly regarded for centuries depreciated , there are many people who represent the opinion | have depreciated |
| 30 | 242 | Tense | addicted. They lost this feeling of freedom they had at th | have lost |
| 31 | 117 | Tense | ened and they result in the increase of violence in politics./^t/Viole | have resulted |
| 32 | 210 | Tense | ty of modern art some artists started to forget that 'visual art is visual' 0 | have started |
| 33 | 157 | Auxilliary | oped countries. They may also 0 cope with poor, non-satisfactory | have to |
| 34 | 154 | Auxilliary | asant duties" to fulfil. They are to attend press conferences, make in | have to |
| 35 | 466 | Tense | not well or had even mild symptoms. In such a way, the hosts woul | have |
| 36 | 499 | Passive-active voice | heir constitutional rights to getting married between gays rights to getting married between gays and | homosexual marriage |
| 37 | 176 | Verb number error | antipathy towards gay people are still very strong. The child adopted by gays | is |
| 38 | 773 | Auxilliary | active children are varied , and perhaps only | may be |
| 39 | 108 | Auxilliary | y. Among them can also be people with weak personalities 0 | may |
| 40 | 134 | Tense | criminals from East and West met here. Recently there are more a | meet |
| 41 | 176 | Auxilliary | cross serious obstacles which shall make the fitting into a society {whether | might |
| 42 | 531 | Tense | c only in India. However, it has rapidly spread to other countries. Its outbreaks occur in the wa | rapidly spread |
| 43 | 347 | Finite vs non-finite uses | or pleasure or relax , it may be even a matter of life and de | relaxing |
| 44 | 342 | Auxilliary | is definitely something which can be considered one of them . P | should |
| 45 | 287 | Finite vs non-finite uses | e past religion was the force shaping the lives of individuals and nations, nowadays it | that shaped |
| 46 | 480 | Passive-active voice | r and control./^t/The fact of opening the borders , and all the same | the borders being open |
| 47 | 145 | Passive-active voice | and their emotions are easier to be controlled . Being a parent demands a lot of involvment | to control |
| 48 | 681 | Verb number error | f that the majority of people tries to place themselves somewhere where the party is | try |
| 49 | 6 | Tense | er, we love each other and we do everything to protect our love against the | will do |
| 50 | 279 | Auxilliary | n doing so they will become self dependable and | would |